Real test writing on 09/12/2024 – The debate on littering in public spaces

“Some people believe that littering in public spaces is a serious issue, while others think it is not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”

Writing Sample with TEEEL Structure

Introduction

Rewrite the topic in one sentence

Littering in public spaces provokes differing opinions, with some viewing it as a serious issue while others do not.

State your position in one sentence

This essay will explore both perspectives and provide my own view.


Body Paragraph 1

T (Topic sentence)

On the one hand, those who consider littering a serious problem argue that it contributes to environmental pollution.

E (Explain)

When trash accumulates in public places, it not only ruins the visual attractiveness but also poses health risks to the community.

E (Example)

For example, plastic waste can block drains, leading to flooding, while food waste may attract pests that spread disease.

E (Elaboration)

Furthermore, littering shows a lack of respect for public property and can encourage others to do the same, worsening the problem.

L (Link back to thesis)

— not needed here


Body Paragraph 2

T (Topic sentence)

On the other hand, some people feel that littering is a minor issue.

E (Explain)

They believe that cleaning services are employed to handle such tasks and that individual littering does not have a significant impact on the environment.

E (Example)

For instance, they might argue that a single piece of litter in a park is unlikely to cause lasting damage, and public maintenance teams will promptly remove it.

E (Elaboration)

Additionally, they claim that there are bigger environmental concerns, such as air pollution and deforestation, that deserve more attention.

L (Link back to thesis)

— not needed here


Body Paragraph 3

T (Topic sentence)

In my view, littering in public spaces is indeed a serious issue.

E (Explain)

Although some may see it as a small-scale problem, its cumulative effect can lead to considerable environmental and social harm.

E (Example)

— not needed here

E (Elaboration)

By neglecting the responsibility of proper waste disposal, we contribute to a culture of carelessness, which can have far-reaching consequences for the environment and public health.

L (Link back to thesis)

— not needed here


Conclusion

Restate position and summarize main points

All in all, while some may downplay the significance of littering, I believe it is an issue that should not be ignored. Proper waste management is essential to maintaining a clean and healthy public environment.

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